Final Story

As I just finished posting my last post I received an email from Dr. Leslie about the short story that I read to you guys in class. He really liked the finished product and thought the begining was much more cohesive and clarified. He also said that the foreshadowing of Mia stealing problems was very insightful--so thanks Ron! And of course, thank you all for listening, I always enjoy reading my work aloud to people who are willing to listen! I really appreciated the advice!